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 ![Vale Concept](https://git.ratface.club/ratface-games/vale-public/raw/branch/main/Assets/Concepts/file_00000000f5686230bb8eaf09d5e151fd.png)
 
 ### Core Concept
-A roguelike adventure game where players embark from Vale, their mountain sanctuary hometown, on epic expeditions where they must effectively balance strategic and action oriented gameplay to deliver their world from a cosmic threat known as The Quiet.
+A roguelike adventure game where players embark from Vale, their mountain sanctuary hometown, on epic expeditions where they must effectively balance strategic and action oriented gameplay to deliver their world from a cosmic threat known as The Quiet, before time runs out.
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 ### Genre & Inspirations
 - **Primary Genre:** Roguelike/Action-Adventure with Heroic Mission Structure
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 - All of the [Expedition](#phase-2) systems remain available, but any settlements, camps, vendors inside The Quiet will become inaccessible to players. 
 - Players must adopt new survival strategies to resist the harmful effects of The Quiet, such as:
    - Scouting ahead in search of natural natural safe zones (e.g. Dark Souls bonfire)
-   - Consuming Wild Magic Jars to produce protective auras and wards 
-   - Defeating powerful enemies to replenish Wild Magic Jars
+   - Consuming rare resources to produce protective auras and wards 
+   - Defeating powerful enemies to replenish rare resources
 - Reach the center of The Quiet before The Omen touches the ground
 - Defeat The Stewards
+- Travel back to Vale**
 
-When victory is achieved, players will be granted rewards - including a Lantern of Return (Homeward Bone) and a new game loop starts immediately.
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-Note: Each loop features various modifiers, such as more powerful enemies, fewer safe zones, faster spreading of The Quiet. 
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+**Players will not need to make the entire journey back to Vale manually. The game world uses a graph/node based loading system. Upon defeating the stewards, the apocalyptic mists will fade and reveal Vale in the not-too-distant locale while they process their rewards.
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